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Faithry Commission 2

Faithry Commission

  • ~25 pages, split in two parts. B/W digest style.
  • Prices: $5 for digest, twice for fullpage, twice for color, $5 for PayPal, $5 for originals. Intended budget: ~100€ (currently ~$130)
    • Payment upon completion or half-way through, via PayPal directly to US charity.
  • Pages are emailed for approval prior to publishing. (tbd: changes?)
    • Mail to: Zefiro@Zefiro.de

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General Idea

I thought about doing two parts, the first catching (first page) and taming/breaking (with longterm bondage, orgasm denial, some pain, sensory deprivation) for about 10 pages, then a little pause (with you doing one or two others from the waiting list), then a second part with training/(ab)using (rape/milking/etc) for another 10 pages.

My main idea still is that of two parts, with after having captured me I'll be brought in, and first part would be more like handling a wild and dangerous animal. Behind bars, in cages, letting it get used to being a prisoner. Strict bondage, solitary, sensual deprivation, with hints to quite some time passing by. Teasing and orgasm denial. Second half would be more "taming and training", bondage to make sure I cooperate, but with others now, teasing + milking, getting (ab)used by other victims (like forced 69), by your scientifiy personel/machines, and by customers (especially my mate Mendra), with humilition aspects as well.

Scenarios for the first Half:

  • breaking
  • tickling
  • chastity
  • teasing
  • obedience training
  • target: broken, useable, knows what happens when making trouble, but won't accept a risk, no cumming, yiff only at end

First Scenario: catching

Page 1

  • couryard of Faithry Island, Mendra intending to buy a dragon for his personal pleasure, Faithry showing him several dragons which would be available
  • all of them are somehow bound, restrained, put on display. perhaps with numbers, price- or name tags on them
  • possible dragons to be shown (Cameos): Erinsis (which Endium was so friendly to deliver in his latexsuit-thingies), TheLonelyDragon, possibly Glee (if he's got a dragon form), possibly Semoy/Sek-Raktaa (need to ask)
  • Mendra hesitating for a little bit, having trouble choosing, before finally going, "I choose…", and he suddenly turns and points at Zefiro who happens to be flying overhead, "That one!"

Page 2

  • Control room, lots of monitors, showing Zefiro in the air and other stuff (like courtyard, island overview, etc, as sketches)
  • Faithry directing an assistant for a net-thrower ("wait for the right moment, get the right angle - SHOT!")
  • Zefiro managing to escape the net (just show me mid-air, collission-avoided, net flying right next to me). Zefiro "I should have known they've got air defense here"
  • Faithry: "Good distraction. Now the real one.", closeup Button press, second net hits and entangles Zefiro, which falls down

Page 3

  • Zefiro fell in a big horizontal net (that's why they needed to aim so carefully), entangled in both nets, but desperately trying to get free
  • uses claws and even his fire breath to get rid of the net. Seems to even halfway succeed, net is partly ripped, slightly burning
  • Faithry - from the distance of a watch tower - taking aim with a big narcotic rifle, similar to how wild animals are caught in Africa
  • closeup of flying arrow with narcoticum, but NOT showing where it hits (I'm phobic to needles so I can't watch at them actually piercing skin)
  • Zefiro falls down, blacked out

Second Scenario: Medical Checkup

strapped to table, on back, securely tied, measurements taken, medical stuff (no needles), machines like in hospital, muzzle tied shut (flameproof) milked with anal probe and desensitive creme to analyze semen, but not give joy of orgasm - then and chastity belt put on, that's for later, with connections for drainage, no orgasm for a long time now any more.

considered potentially dangerous (obviously, as dragon), so lets first do wild animal handling stuff. also, quarantine, Faithry Island IS health inspection certified after all.

Zefiros wings bound, gimp-suit-style bound (hands to shoulder, feet to thigh), head in hood (with tube for breathing but otherwise sensual deprivation), electrodes added, then thrown in big tank with shiny latex

it's antibacterial and needs to be on for some time to make sure i'm safe to handle, you know, health regulations for anything captured in the wild. Zefiro is then raised from the tank, with a rope bound around his tail tip, so he hangs upside down and rather uncomfortably. This makes a quite nice view of a very exposed (but latex-covered), helpless dragon (idea contributed by Merle). And he's left hanging there until tomorrow…

Afterwards (next page) Zefiro has apparently been partly freed and is put in a cell, handled with this collar-pole thingy you found, but even though very restricted and blind he's just too disobidient, kicking, tailswinging, etc, so it is decided to put into solitary confinement for some time. A calender somewhere in background would be nice, so that we can show some time passing.

The 'solitary confinement' is a big storage hall, lots of other boxes/cages, victims are put somewhere there "to be forgotten" Zefiro is put in small space, no movement, like a crate which just fits his folded size, filled with foam or such, connected to feeding/drainage system Faithry sitting at a desk, sending a mail - Closeup reveals it's to Mendra, "delayed by one month" - assistant (speach bubble from the side?) asks whether that's not a bit long, but well, there had been trouble with dragons before, so let's not take a risk and make sure he's properly broken by that time.

Third scenario: Behaviour Training

put into cell again, with hood for breathplay/control but able to see, electro, wings bound to balls (does hurt when trying to spread, idea by Merle), tail to collar, hands/feet free but in mittens, penis cage on, anal free, special ringgag (to prevent fire, uncomfortable, but safety first). training: needs to ride anal dildo in floor, suck wall-mounted dildo for water/food. (one dildo per type, water, food, spooge), riding the anal dildo activates the others, then need to go there and choose one. 'food' will randomly activate shocker (and chances gets worse each day), to train to use spooge instead - where nutritiants are added, so actually this should be good enough to feed that solely. show calender: some time passed

Fourth scenario: Agility Training

Now I'm not sure about references to © material, whether this would be acceptable. The idea would be heavily "Portal" suggestive. Same outfit on Zefiro as before. He's inside a king of porno version of Portal, needs to go through a maze, solve certain puzzles porn style: ride dildos, carry spooge somewhere (how? well, two holes available to hold it…), balance with weigths attached to sensitive parts (which do hurt when loosing balance and need to restart), etc Companion cube somewhere (if reference is allowed), need to drag it along with just buttplug-handle. There might be a tickle-stocks station, where the victim needs to place myself in there, they lock automatically, and the victim need to endure the tickling but does not know how long - if aborted too early, he has to start all over again. if going wrong way, trying to find a shortcut → electroshock. The whole thing is observed through windows by Faithry and Mendra We might even add a "RexLab" reference there, e.g. put the logo on a crate. (Should ask Rangarik about this first, thought - would he also like to have a Cameo?) This would also be a good setting to place a cameo of Nerkitt as a lab rat being examined there, with some scientist personal taking notes on a clipboard.

End of current stream of ideas. No cumming so far (except for initial examination), though perhaps "constant arousal" might be added at some point

Unsorted ideas, not yet ordered

Hmm, for instance, off the top of my head: you could have a little scene where Zefiro is placed in a vacbed whose insides are coated with a numbing agent, leaving him unable to feel anything except with the penis that juts from a hole/ring in the vacbed, leaving him in complete sensory deprivation except for his penis, with which any passerbys will be playing.

As for handled like an animal, do you mean something like collar-poles? ( http://images.mirror.co.uk/upl/m4/j.....-712415075.jpg )

Solitary confinement where he has to ride a dildo to get his food?

Tightly-restrained with electrotorture toys attached to his body (and intimates), programmed to hit poor Zefiro with harder shocks the further his new owner('s little transmitter) is away from him? It's just an idea to make Zefiro appreciate his new owner's presence, using pavlovian conditioning to make him expect pain when he's not in her presence.

You and another male bound together sitting back to back. Each one of you has a small pump in your hands and each pump is attached to a dildo that is in the other males ass, each pump makes the dildo move inside of the other male. A master is in the back looking on with glee. The male who can use the pump to make the other one cum first gets set free and is allowed to be the master of the other male for the rest of the night. (HandofBlades, would join in as the second male)

combination of raping machines, latex. And it would involve being in public But well the machine would have you in a bike riding position, your body engulfed in tight latex, the machine fucking you both ends with phallus shapes pounding fast and you would be in a gym shop window advertising how the gym will give you a work out. And course the machine miles you and pumps your own juices in your mouth and rear tailhole :3

The primary difficulty with keeping a dragon in naughty bondage has got to be the wings. They look a bit delicate, so they have to be kept from harm, but we can't list let you fly away…so I was considering cuffing those claws I see at the joint of the wing, either cuffing them to each other or perhaps to a collar. That should keep them folded behind you, at least well enough to keep you from flying. . Of course, someone who wanted to be a bit sadistic could re-use the wing bindings from Salkafar's picture, just attach them to some portion of your anatomy… run a rope from the wings up between your legs, perhaps, attached to the front of your collar, or even put a harness around a certain sensitive organ and attach the wing-bondage to that. I think it'd be a bit hard for you to spread your wings if it tugged there every time you tried. . Something that occurs to me is killing two birds with one stone - it might be feasible to tie your arms folded behind your back, then tie your wings to them, binding up arms and wings both into a neat, tidy package along your back. That leaves your whole front unobstructed. . A minimalistic approach could be easily done by using those cute horns as a bondage aid - connect them to your tail, with a sufficiently short rope that your tail and head must both be pulled back, and you should have some trouble getting well-balanced enough to take off! Add a hobble and bind your arms behind your back, and you should be both fairly helpless and easily able to walk wherever you need to (though watch your step, you won't be able to look down!) . One last thing - if you don't need to be able to walk, it could be interesting to bind your wings and arms behind your back as mentioned before, then tie your legs ankle-to-thigh, and hang you upside down by the tail. A nicely open, helpless, swinging dragon…not a bad way to be displayed! (Merle)

part 1

  1. in cell, sitting at wall, hands bound head-level to wall, collar to wall, feet to floor, chastized, blindfolded, abused?
  2. "kerze", on back, feet in air, overhead, to head, candle in ass → movement = hot wax (dragon-hot), chastized, training for "cum into own mouth"
  3. shibari
  4. in stock, tickled (chasted)
  5. petplay, prevent standup
  6. forced riding dildo
  7. needing to keep balance
  8. suspension
  9. in stocks, as furniture, sensory deprivation
  10. motion detection, electro
  11. size test: what can I handly? with machines

part 2

  1. on knees, ass in air, face on the floor, hands to feet, tail to collar, ready to be abused anal
  2. on wooden pony (or vibrator), knees bent, feets cuffed, ellbows behind back (e.g. with spreader bar, hands to front again, collar to ceiling, ready to be abused oral, toys anal
  3. kneeling, feet bound (spreader), hands behind back (folded), ringgagged, abused oral, hold by horns
  4. on table on back, feet in air, spread, head slightly lowered, ready to be abused oral+anal
  5. petplay: gimb suit, ringgagged for abuse, hands/feet bend and tight, in full rubber
  6. cameo of jay, reference to horse ride
  7. bound together w/ someone else, teasing each other
  8. gimpsuit, struggling helplessly in some open space, teased
  9. milking, strict bondage, breath control

Restructured

Scene 1: The scene opens up into an open courtyard on Faithry Island. A private slave-sale is in progress with various male dragons bound in display positions while Faithry personally guides Mendra through the choices. Mendra is wearing a set of simple shorts and carrying a velvet pouch in one hand, while Faithry wears a business suit simplified with a knee-length skirt rather than pants. "And, have you chosen?", Faithry asks Mendra, gesturing at the three bound dragonslaves. The slaves in question are Glee, Erinsis and Tiemeth. Glee is bound on his knees, wrists bound to the front of his collar, forcing him in a doggy-begging position. He's gagged, thoroughly erect, and drooling prefluid. Erinsis is standing on all fours, rump uplifted, covered from head-to-toe in a semifluid latex suit (reference note here). His tailtip is attached to the back of his neck (the suit sticking there), and he's pointed with his rump to the viewer, as if presenting. His arms and legs are held in a rectangle of spreaderbars to keep him in that position. He, too, is erect, but his shaft is sheathed in a thick layer of the latexy material. Tiemeth is bound in a crouching position on a small pedestal, tail curled around his feet, his snout pointed down, his wings slightly mantled. The general positioning is heavily reminiscent of a gargoyle's. Various rods and adjustable joints along his limbs hold him in that position, and a ring-gag keeps his mouth open.

All three bound dragons have a visible price-tag hanging off the tip of the penis, although of course, the numbers are too small for the viewer to read.

Mendra thinks for a moment, saying, "I choose…"

He suddenly points skywards (panel with a dramatic along-the-arm upward angle view), finishing the sentence with "…that one!". He's pointing at the backlit silhuette of Zefiro, who just happens to be flying overhead.

The next panel is a top-down view, showing Zefiro in-flight over the island, wearing little more than a toolbelt with several beltpouches. He's rolling aside midflight at that moment, narrowly avoiding a launched net flying right past him. "What the-", he curses.

The next launched net snags him, though, and he falls into a horizontal net that the capture team quickly closes around him. One of the bears jabs an electroshock-prod against the back of Zefiro's skull and he goes unconscious, but not without causing fire and claw-damage to the nets. (His fire-breath is the cause of the fire-damage, obviously!)

Scene 2: The next scene shows a technologically-themed rooms somewhat similar to those shown in Rangarig's Dragon Capacity Training comic. A large cylindrical vat filled with black fluid stands off to the side, but the viewer's focus is on Zefiro. He's dangling from a large robotic arm, similar to those used in building cars but considerably larger, with a wide, flat inhuman robot-hand that presses against Zefiro's back and holds his arms, wings, legs, tail and neck with clamps. Zefiro is muzzled with a simple band, naked, but awake, growling, showing teeth where he can and fighting against the bondage. Faithry, now wearing her labcoat again, seems to be ignoring him except for a momentary, "Nice teeth, I guess I don't have to check that.". Faithry writes something on her clipboard. "Last check then." With her latex-gloved hands, she presses a prostate-massaging probe into Zefiro's tailhole, and massages his prostate until he erects and begins leaking his seed without reaching orgasm. She squeezes some of the seed into a collection vial and caps it. Zefiro's not enjoying it at all, growling throughout, especially when she pushes a plug into his rump. Finally, she places a full mask (without eyeholes) over Zefiro's snout, one with air and food tubes jutting through that run along the robot-arm's length to the ceiling.

"There, now for your anesthetic quarantine bath. You're going to be in there for a while.", Faithry warns as the robotic arm begins moving and lowers Zefiro into the vat, the thick dark fluid soon stealing him from sight.

The next frame shows a zoomed-out view of the room, showing Faithry casually walking away while also widening the field of view enough to show that it's a very large room, and there are many more of those vats in neat ranks, almost all of them with robotic arms holding something (or someone) under the surface.

Scene 3:

Faithry in her labcoat and Mendra are standing together in a well-lit, spartan room, looking through the window in the far wall. The window looks down into another room where Zefiro crawls on hands and knees, hands mittened and wrists cuffed together, knees padded and chained a short distance apart (so he can still shuffle around). He's muzzled but with his mouth open partway, his maleness is caged in a chastity cage, and his tail is kept stiff by a rod along it's length. The chamber they look into itself consists of blocks of various heights and a set of human-sized glass-like hamstertubes that run through the room and along the ceiling. Not all this detail is likely to be visible at once.

Faithry is describing the scene to Mendra: "The testchambers, sponsored in part by Rexlabs, allows us to give the trainee a sense that he's making his own decisions, while still forced to do various submissive tasks to complete the trial."

The next view is inside the testchamber, where Nerkitt is crawling blindly through the hamstertubes. Blindly because he's completely hooded, with only his ears, nose and whiskers protruding. His rump is plugged, his wrists are attached to his collar with short chains and the tightness of the tubes forces him to crawl along like a feral rat. He's also quite erect. The wall outside a horizontal section of the tube (in the room where Zefiro is) shows this pictography: (rat in tube) → (rat at tube-hole with penis sticking through) → (dragonhead sucking at rat penis) → (dragonhead dripping semen in bucket). There's a hole in the underside of the tube near that pictography that's large enough to allow Nerkitt's penis through. When we first see them, we already see Nerkitt crawling towards the hole, with Zefiro using his forepaws to bang against the tube to lead Nerkitt there through sound.

When Nerkitt's penis sticks out through the hole in the underside of the tube, Zefiro gets under it, and suckles Nerkitt to orgasm, before carrying the seed in his mouth to a bucket hanging beside the door into the next chamber, which slides open.

Scene 4:

The scene opens up on a cage so tiny that Zefiro barely fits in it. His wings have no room to spread and metal nubs stud the insides of the bars. The floor of the cage is plain but solid, lacking the electrode nubs but decorated with a single dildo buried firmly in Zefiro's rump. Zefiro's manacled to the floor of the cage with wrists and ankles, he wears a ringgag-muzzle and a chastity cage around his shaft. There's a plate of food standing a short distance from the front of the cage, and a water and seed nipple (both nipples lifelike dragondildos) are thrust into the cage like rodent-feeders. Zefiro's slowly riding the dildo in his rump while giving a blowjob to the seednipple, but he's growling while he does it. (This introductory panel should be larger than normal)

This is followed by a panel displaying a portion of Mendra's head from behind, where he sits behind his computer, reading his E-mail. The contents of the mail he's reading are enlarged in the next panel so the viewer can read it too:

"Progress report: Dearest client, your dragon pet is making good progress in the third week. He's learned to stay compact to avoid the electrodes, and learned that reaching for the food shocks him. He's getting used to riding the dildo to activate the dispenser-cocks. Drinking the fortified seed still causes some signs of resistance though."

This is followed by a darkened (to imply nighttime/darkness) picture of Zefiro asleep in his cage. An in-frame shows a close-ups of a part of Zefiro touching the electrodes and getting zapped, waking him up. (InframeRef.jpg for in-frame reference.)

2nd test chamber. big panel showing main scene with smaller panels (in-panel style) showing "action shots". pictogram on the wall: (companion cube with buttplug protruding from in zone A) → (dragon hobbling along with moving the cube through the buttplug) → (cube is in zone B). (can be on wall in background or as in-panel closeup) Zefiro dressed like previous panel, in a way that he can't just grap it with his hands or similar, but has to "sit" on it. main panel: showing the room, Zefiro to the front and left, zone A (circle on the floor with Letter 'A') next to him with cube standing there. faucet on the wall next to it, labeled "lube". the room looks somewhat big, a dotted line showing how to move, which includes moving upwards, on a small pole/bridge, a ladder, to "Zone B" somewhere in the far end of the room, next to the door. If possibly, draw the room 3d-style so that the "far end" is both right and further away (deeper in the monitor) in-panels around this main panel showing short action closeups: a) Zefiro getting some lube from the faucet by using his mouth (could also be a dildo-shaped one, like in scene 4) b) Zefiros rump closeup, just sitting down to 'grab' the cube, showing that it's a quite big buttplug c) Zefiro at the ladder, with the cube just falling down, indicating that he needs to climb down again and get it (just draw what's necessary to get this idea accross) d) small window at top of room with the heads of Faithry and Mendra looking through it (can be small, just for background) (the rooms should look Portal-like, with the white walls, an occassional camera, dotted lines between the triggers, etc)


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